As you people should know if you're reading the blog (or if not...), Spleafnet is now hosting our beloved AR.. I mean SPLEAFNET sites. I know I've been saying I'll be writing soon but really I've had no requests and then the AR situation happened. So we'll have to postpone the date a bit further until people settle down and whatnot.
Which now brings me to the opening of my new blog... TheJelloEmperor's Spleafnet RP Reviews!! WOOOO!!! *cough*
~Jello
Woof [7.0/10]
Greetings and salutations to all! As I promised here is the review that is LONG overdue, I suppose you'll have to forgive me for being a little rusty as I've been thrown into the lovely world of college and school work once again. BUT FEAR NOT! I shall move forward on with this little blog of mine and rate where no Jello Emperor has rated before!
... And now with that little thing out of the way... WOOF! No, I mean the site Woof! This site is probably the first werewolf site I've rated, yes I said werewolf. Wolves and horses are aplenty but werewolves I haven't seen much of personally so this will be a good venture for us all.
So the AD here, is fairly basic which is fine and I see they have site stats and such and overall I have no problems with a basic AD. It seems though that there are parts where it looks like a new paragraph and I'm a stickler for indenting those paragraphs but I think that it would just make it look a little nicer.
But toss your garlic necklaces into the trash bin because this is Werewolf county, punk! Grab your silver coins for good luck and walk softly and carry a large silver sword right into the review! (Jello points to anyone who gets that reference...)
First Impression:
Quick little personality test! Take a look at the wolf picture, is he looking away from you or looking at you? Post in the comments and let me know!
Anyway, the layout looks nice and neat and I have no problems with anything. The site it self makes good use of screen real estate while still framing it to look nice.
The Public Area:
Rules page is overall fine, I do have a nitpick though. I'm not a fan of curse words in the public area, as it is public. Do whatever you want in the private parts but when you're creating an image for yourself keep it acceptable for a parent to peek at.
(Also, there are various spelling errors: Ralphie in rule one, lightning in rule two.)
Ranks page is fine.
Dynamics page is overall fine, just various spelling and grammar errors strewn about the page.
The Application:
Your standard application, so not much to say about it.
The Private Area:
Layout Chaaaange! Well, actually it's more like an expansion but nonetheless the layout is still simple and provides everything you need on initial screen load. The space is used again efficiently so I have no problems.
There is very little information that's new in the private area, site setting and pack meetings and such so most of the info you need is in the public area.
Forums:
Good amount of forums and nice descriptions and of course I love the hot links, overall I have no problems with the forums. I do like how the forum posts look like speech bubbles though.
Other:
The member list looks nice, divided by user level and avatar pictures for both the human and wolf counterparts along with general user stats.
The member profiles look nice and organized, are all the fields are generally filled out with the ones that I looked at.
Roleplaying:
From what I read on the forums I categorize the roleplaying on this site to be Intermediate to High Intermediate.
Rating: 7.0 out of 10 Points
Overall it looks to be a good site, takes advantage of the site layout well but even though I haven't rated many werewolf sites I didn't really see much innovation or something that would pull me into joining and fleshing out a character.
So concludes my foray back into the reviewing world, hopefully many more will be showing up!
Reviewed by: The Jello Emperor
Arcadia [9.2/10]
Howdy, howdy, howdy! How are ya? It's time for another review on this fine.... Saturday? Yes! Real life is always a bother at times so this review is coming on a wondrous Saturday! Hopefully these random extension days won't happen very often but enough about myself, you're here to read about Arcadia, a Pern RP!
Now I first let me say I know very very little about Pern, and have never RP'ed on a Pern website. So if I harp on something that makes total sense in the Pern world then feel free to laugh at my lack of knowledge and move on! (Pern is dragons, right?)
The AD for the site is nice and neat and this site is already after my own heart. "You don't need to know Pern" , well I'll fit right in! And this is a good example of even if you don't have a pretty image, your AD can be just as good or even much better than one with a flashy image.
Lets hop on our dragons, fry up that evil aristocrat and... YOUR WISH HAS BEEN GRANTED!!! It's time for the review! (Yes... my dragon reference was from DBZ. I told you I don't know Pern!)
First Impression:
Is this a scene from Gladiator? This looks like the Fields of Elysium. Anyway, the layout looks nice enough I personally would have preferred it if it was a bit smaller but it looks like the owner was trying to use up all the space which is fine.
The Public Area:
There's lots of information but I must say, I FINALLY KNOW WHAT THREADS ARE! I've looked at some other Pern sites before but for some reason the explanation of what the heck "Thread" is absent. Also everything is nice and neatly organized and its nice to see all this detail.
In the ranks portion of the information, I would like to have seen the actual rank names in bold, in the previous pages (to this point) there has been bolding so it seems odd to not have any on this page.
In the Dragon Descriptions I really like how you posted the colors, some of them are a bit hard to make out because of the background BUT I still love the idea.
The Application:
You get the rules and application guide before you can apply which is a good idea, and I have no problems with any of it. So to the actual application!
As like the site is, the application is neat and organized, having OOC, Character and Dragon sections.
The Private Area:
Layout Change! Everything again, looks nice and neat and everything appears to be on the the initial page load. There isn't any extra pages in the private area that I can see, but all the info you need is in the public area which is great (aside from like the Firelizards and Calendar page).
Forums:
The forums (as expected!) are nice, and organized well. I would have liked to see some sort of jumping between areas or using a script to divide and show only certain areas. Also the descriptions of the area are both in the forum list and the topic list which is something I've never seen before.
Other:
The Member list is nice and yet very simple, and of course is neat so it works well with the theme of the whole site.
Member profiles are very nice, giving you information in sections and using code to only display the certain portions you want. This also goes for the dragons, so it's like a section in a section with a section in a section....? It's good, that's all that matters!
Roleplaying:
From what I read on the forums I categorize the roleplaying on this site to be Intermediate to High Intermediate.
Rating: 9.2 out of 10 Points.
For those wondering on how this affects the rankings I'm bumping everyone else up a point. Consider it a "Mini Score Review" but this site deserves a spot in the top! There isn't really much bad I can say about the site except for the forums not living up to the rest of the greatness. So there you have it, another site reaches the 9's. This Pern site has a bright future so join it TODAY! ... I'll post the bunny picture again if you do!
This Site has the Jello Seal of Approval!
Reviewed by: The Jello Emperor
Now I first let me say I know very very little about Pern, and have never RP'ed on a Pern website. So if I harp on something that makes total sense in the Pern world then feel free to laugh at my lack of knowledge and move on! (Pern is dragons, right?)
The AD for the site is nice and neat and this site is already after my own heart. "You don't need to know Pern" , well I'll fit right in! And this is a good example of even if you don't have a pretty image, your AD can be just as good or even much better than one with a flashy image.
Lets hop on our dragons, fry up that evil aristocrat and... YOUR WISH HAS BEEN GRANTED!!! It's time for the review! (Yes... my dragon reference was from DBZ. I told you I don't know Pern!)
First Impression:
Is this a scene from Gladiator? This looks like the Fields of Elysium. Anyway, the layout looks nice enough I personally would have preferred it if it was a bit smaller but it looks like the owner was trying to use up all the space which is fine.
The Public Area:
There's lots of information but I must say, I FINALLY KNOW WHAT THREADS ARE! I've looked at some other Pern sites before but for some reason the explanation of what the heck "Thread" is absent. Also everything is nice and neatly organized and its nice to see all this detail.
In the ranks portion of the information, I would like to have seen the actual rank names in bold, in the previous pages (to this point) there has been bolding so it seems odd to not have any on this page.
In the Dragon Descriptions I really like how you posted the colors, some of them are a bit hard to make out because of the background BUT I still love the idea.
The Application:
You get the rules and application guide before you can apply which is a good idea, and I have no problems with any of it. So to the actual application!
As like the site is, the application is neat and organized, having OOC, Character and Dragon sections.
The Private Area:
Layout Change! Everything again, looks nice and neat and everything appears to be on the the initial page load. There isn't any extra pages in the private area that I can see, but all the info you need is in the public area which is great (aside from like the Firelizards and Calendar page).
Forums:
The forums (as expected!) are nice, and organized well. I would have liked to see some sort of jumping between areas or using a script to divide and show only certain areas. Also the descriptions of the area are both in the forum list and the topic list which is something I've never seen before.
Other:
The Member list is nice and yet very simple, and of course is neat so it works well with the theme of the whole site.
Member profiles are very nice, giving you information in sections and using code to only display the certain portions you want. This also goes for the dragons, so it's like a section in a section with a section in a section....? It's good, that's all that matters!
Roleplaying:
From what I read on the forums I categorize the roleplaying on this site to be Intermediate to High Intermediate.
Rating: 9.2 out of 10 Points.
For those wondering on how this affects the rankings I'm bumping everyone else up a point. Consider it a "Mini Score Review" but this site deserves a spot in the top! There isn't really much bad I can say about the site except for the forums not living up to the rest of the greatness. So there you have it, another site reaches the 9's. This Pern site has a bright future so join it TODAY! ... I'll post the bunny picture again if you do!
This Site has the Jello Seal of Approval!
Reviewed by: The Jello Emperor
Serenity [6.7/10]
It's Tuesday so that means it's time for another Jello Review! Sorry I don't have an in-depth movie reference or random TV reference for today's site, but that's because today's site is... Serenity! And no, I'm not talking about the blind girl from the Yu-Gi-OH series (Hah! Got one in there!). Today site is another foray into the world of horses, herds, and territories.
First off I'd like to apologize if I start coming off a bit harsh, I've been battling illness so my annoyance levels are already high with coughing every 3 seconds. But anyway, the AD starts of honest in admitting that an equine RP isn't the most original! As always I skipped down to the bullet points first before reading the text, and so far it seems like every newer horse RP out there. Point system, herds, etc. I think the ability to be a domesticated or wild horse is new... but truthfully I lack the expertise to fully know.
Now put on those boots cowboy, saddle up and lets ride off into the sunset! .... After you read the review of course, of course, which this special horse will endorse, of course, the famous Mr. Ed!
First Impression:
Tornado!! Antonio Banderas was looking for you! The only problems I see are rather small. I see no link back to the index page and the other one small thing I have is that I shouldn't have tried to read the blurry text on the main image, made my eyes hurt a bit.
The Public Area:
The About page I always love these pages, and not because I'm a closed in outcast of the social world and love to keep track of people I can talk to of the opposite gender.
(What? I go outside... when the sun goes down, SOMETIMES...)
But I feel that these pages help connect with members a bit because knowing a little information about the admins makes them seem a bit more down to earth which is both good and bad.
Rules page is fine except for one part, where you talk about posting images and stuff. Those who lack any HTML knowledge will not know to take out the asterisks so you should probably tell them to. (I realize some people can deduce to take out the asterisks but if you've read my reviews before you know my faith in humanity is lacking.)
The Application:
It's nice and simple, so pretty much what you would expect from an application.
The Private Area:
Artax did you run away from Atreyu AGAIN?! And layout change! It seems like the links are kinda squished together here though, most notably in the recent posts section. I suppose there really isn't much you can do about that though. I suppose it's funny to note that I had to look through the links twice because I forgot "boards" is another way to say "forums."
I see a few pages in the private area but I cannot access them so I can't go over their point system or anything. Going over the point system is probably what I was most looking forward to actually, but no matter we'll just move onto the next section!
Forums:
There is a good amount of forums with good descriptions, but it's just one giant text wall of pain. There is no separation between areas and like I said it's all one continuous text-fest. Again it seems everything is squished in a little area so perhaps an expansion of the layout is needed to benefit the site as a whole.
Other:
The member list is just your basic list, not really anything done here to spruce it up. So probably something to look into.
The member profiles are at least organized very well because as I picked some random profiles there weren't filled out at all.
Roleplaying:
From what I read on the forum I categorize the roleplaying on this site to be Intermediate to Advanced.
Rating: 6.7 out of 10 Points
First of all make note that I'm giving them a bit of slack, compensating a bit for my irritability while being ill. Most likely if I was able to see the point system it would be a solid or close to 7 rating. Overall the site seems to be in the cookie cutter mold of horse RPs. I'm not really saying this is bad, but I didn't really see anything new or exciting on the site.
Reviewed by: The Jello Emperor
First off I'd like to apologize if I start coming off a bit harsh, I've been battling illness so my annoyance levels are already high with coughing every 3 seconds. But anyway, the AD starts of honest in admitting that an equine RP isn't the most original! As always I skipped down to the bullet points first before reading the text, and so far it seems like every newer horse RP out there. Point system, herds, etc. I think the ability to be a domesticated or wild horse is new... but truthfully I lack the expertise to fully know.
Now put on those boots cowboy, saddle up and lets ride off into the sunset! .... After you read the review of course, of course, which this special horse will endorse, of course, the famous Mr. Ed!
First Impression:
Tornado!! Antonio Banderas was looking for you! The only problems I see are rather small. I see no link back to the index page and the other one small thing I have is that I shouldn't have tried to read the blurry text on the main image, made my eyes hurt a bit.
The Public Area:
The About page I always love these pages, and not because I'm a closed in outcast of the social world and love to keep track of people I can talk to of the opposite gender.
(What? I go outside... when the sun goes down, SOMETIMES...)
But I feel that these pages help connect with members a bit because knowing a little information about the admins makes them seem a bit more down to earth which is both good and bad.
Rules page is fine except for one part, where you talk about posting images and stuff. Those who lack any HTML knowledge will not know to take out the asterisks so you should probably tell them to. (I realize some people can deduce to take out the asterisks but if you've read my reviews before you know my faith in humanity is lacking.)
The Application:
It's nice and simple, so pretty much what you would expect from an application.
The Private Area:
Artax did you run away from Atreyu AGAIN?! And layout change! It seems like the links are kinda squished together here though, most notably in the recent posts section. I suppose there really isn't much you can do about that though. I suppose it's funny to note that I had to look through the links twice because I forgot "boards" is another way to say "forums."
I see a few pages in the private area but I cannot access them so I can't go over their point system or anything. Going over the point system is probably what I was most looking forward to actually, but no matter we'll just move onto the next section!
Forums:
There is a good amount of forums with good descriptions, but it's just one giant text wall of pain. There is no separation between areas and like I said it's all one continuous text-fest. Again it seems everything is squished in a little area so perhaps an expansion of the layout is needed to benefit the site as a whole.
Other:
The member list is just your basic list, not really anything done here to spruce it up. So probably something to look into.
The member profiles are at least organized very well because as I picked some random profiles there weren't filled out at all.
Roleplaying:
From what I read on the forum I categorize the roleplaying on this site to be Intermediate to Advanced.
Rating: 6.7 out of 10 Points
First of all make note that I'm giving them a bit of slack, compensating a bit for my irritability while being ill. Most likely if I was able to see the point system it would be a solid or close to 7 rating. Overall the site seems to be in the cookie cutter mold of horse RPs. I'm not really saying this is bad, but I didn't really see anything new or exciting on the site.
Reviewed by: The Jello Emperor
Water Frontier [7.3/10]
Space: The Final Frontier, these are the voyages of the Starship Jello-prise. Its everlasting mission, to bring order to the Acornrack world. To seek out new innovative RP ideas. To boldly rate all sites where no man has gone before.
*cue Star Trek:TNG theme*
Okay, okay that was a long intro but it DOES tie into today's review of a RP site called Water Frontier! This is a space cowboy or space pirate RP that will probably cater to the fans of the anime Outlaw Star or Cowboy Bebop and if you're not sure what those are perhaps you should read a review of it... from a certain group on AR tentatively called The Acornrack Anime Rangers (That means the name might be changed!), that a certain someone is contributing on.
Anyway, the AD for the site is nice enough. The picture is neat and the story block is.. well a story block. This site really does remind me of Outlaw star kind of... but maybe that's because I just watched it a few days ago.
See you Space Cowboy... as we hyperjump into the review!
.........KAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHNN!!!!
(I know you were waiting for that one!)
First Impression:
I'm starting to get thirsty... But I think this is one of the few sites that has a more light color scheme, and to me it kinda looks like a website for a water plant. If you don't read any of the text anyway, like "Water Fronter: Your leading water purifier and provider in the Arizona area!" (No I don't live in Arizona) For me the layout seems a bit too stiff but for some it may work.
The Public Area:
For me the little blurb on the Index page is what I would have put on the AD, and used what's on the AD for the main story section for the site. Maybe it's just me but ADs that are short and sweet always seem to be much better in the long run because it's an advertisement and not a thesis.
Ranks page, there isn't really a problem here just that I was surprised that since this is a sort of a "Wild Wild Space" RP I was surprised to not find a rogue or freelancer rank. Someone who takes on jobs that are too political for mainstream companies that would damage sponsors and whatnot.
Rules page, one of my favorite pages because I get to whine a bunch! So here we go! Rule number one! You say use realism and then pull out the eye color thing, and talk about technology in the same paragraph. So have multicolored contacts is a no-no? Or a formerly blind man from an accident who has robotic eyes that happen to reflect and act as a mini-prism! I'd argue that mankind would invent cosmetic luxuries before decent space ships any day.
And I'd probably rather play an alien of some kind instead of a human in a space RP, because it's spaaaace! So perhaps you should look into that as a suggestion.
Otherwise everything else looks fine.
The Application:
Neat and organized and generally your standard gambit. However, the RP sample actually has a small backstory so you're not just thrown into a whirling poop-storm of confusion and misery! So nice touch there.
The Private Area:
Layout stays the same more or less just the addition of the cbox on the left hand side if you look at the picture. Anyway there isn't any private pages to look at that I see so we shall move onto the next section!
Forums:
Good amount of forums and descriptions and I like the divisions and pictures and things. Overall all is good, no problems here!
Other:
Member list is a little different in that you just see the avatar picture with their name underneath and their rank and faction while being sorted into pirates, tankers, or civillians.
Member profiles are generally filled out well and organized nicely also. but more or less the same as you'd see in any decent site.
Roleplaying:
From what I read on the forums I categorize the roleplaying on thie site to be Intermediate to Advanced.
Rating: 7.5 out of 10 Points.
Overall a good site and even though it's taking on a genre that I don't see much of, it's what exactly I'd expect it to be. Which means I'm saying there isn't anything I found to be outstanding or anything that made think, "I didn't think about doing it like that." or anything of the sort. Probably a huge hit with any Cowboy Bebop or Outlaw Star fans though.
Reviewed by: The Jello Emperor
*cue Star Trek:TNG theme*
Okay, okay that was a long intro but it DOES tie into today's review of a RP site called Water Frontier! This is a space cowboy or space pirate RP that will probably cater to the fans of the anime Outlaw Star or Cowboy Bebop and if you're not sure what those are perhaps you should read a review of it... from a certain group on AR tentatively called The Acornrack Anime Rangers (That means the name might be changed!), that a certain someone is contributing on.
Anyway, the AD for the site is nice enough. The picture is neat and the story block is.. well a story block. This site really does remind me of Outlaw star kind of... but maybe that's because I just watched it a few days ago.
See you Space Cowboy... as we hyperjump into the review!
.........KAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHNN!!!!
(I know you were waiting for that one!)
First Impression:
I'm starting to get thirsty... But I think this is one of the few sites that has a more light color scheme, and to me it kinda looks like a website for a water plant. If you don't read any of the text anyway, like "Water Fronter: Your leading water purifier and provider in the Arizona area!" (No I don't live in Arizona) For me the layout seems a bit too stiff but for some it may work.
The Public Area:
For me the little blurb on the Index page is what I would have put on the AD, and used what's on the AD for the main story section for the site. Maybe it's just me but ADs that are short and sweet always seem to be much better in the long run because it's an advertisement and not a thesis.
Ranks page, there isn't really a problem here just that I was surprised that since this is a sort of a "Wild Wild Space" RP I was surprised to not find a rogue or freelancer rank. Someone who takes on jobs that are too political for mainstream companies that would damage sponsors and whatnot.
Rules page, one of my favorite pages because I get to whine a bunch! So here we go! Rule number one! You say use realism and then pull out the eye color thing, and talk about technology in the same paragraph. So have multicolored contacts is a no-no? Or a formerly blind man from an accident who has robotic eyes that happen to reflect and act as a mini-prism! I'd argue that mankind would invent cosmetic luxuries before decent space ships any day.
And I'd probably rather play an alien of some kind instead of a human in a space RP, because it's spaaaace! So perhaps you should look into that as a suggestion.
Otherwise everything else looks fine.
The Application:
Neat and organized and generally your standard gambit. However, the RP sample actually has a small backstory so you're not just thrown into a whirling poop-storm of confusion and misery! So nice touch there.
The Private Area:
Layout stays the same more or less just the addition of the cbox on the left hand side if you look at the picture. Anyway there isn't any private pages to look at that I see so we shall move onto the next section!
Forums:
Good amount of forums and descriptions and I like the divisions and pictures and things. Overall all is good, no problems here!
Other:
Member list is a little different in that you just see the avatar picture with their name underneath and their rank and faction while being sorted into pirates, tankers, or civillians.
Member profiles are generally filled out well and organized nicely also. but more or less the same as you'd see in any decent site.
Roleplaying:
From what I read on the forums I categorize the roleplaying on thie site to be Intermediate to Advanced.
Rating: 7.5 out of 10 Points.
Overall a good site and even though it's taking on a genre that I don't see much of, it's what exactly I'd expect it to be. Which means I'm saying there isn't anything I found to be outstanding or anything that made think, "I didn't think about doing it like that." or anything of the sort. Probably a huge hit with any Cowboy Bebop or Outlaw Star fans though.
Reviewed by: The Jello Emperor
Riylon [7.9/10]
Holy month-of-absence Batman! Yes, after a month of whining about college and school and stuff I AM BACK IN FULL FORCE! ....Okay not FULL force but I've decided that one month is WAAAY too long for me to stop posting so here we are, with a review of Riylon! Riylon is a fantasy, (mostly) freeform RP that promises loads of fun with 20 different races! Yeah I'm a bit rusty, can ya tell?
Anyway, the AD for the site is alright... truth be told I actually directly went to the points that were written out before I actually read the backstory. But when I did read the backstory it was more or less fine and dandy.
Let me put on my sexy leggings and lets grab a few customers, shall we? No? Well lets just get into the review then!
First Impression:
For some reason I feel like playing Dune... While I assume this is stylistic choice, the page is brown and... yeah. I don't have any real problems with the layout on functionality just that so far all I see is brown. Also, the little text there, I assume there trying to portray something deep and profound but isn't that the DEFINITION of darkness? But I digress, lets move on.
The Public Area:
The Races page is particularly impressive, I do have to admit that I didn't read through ALL of them. However, I am confident that if they spent this much time on them they should all be very well detailed.
The Magic page is also very nicely written as well, and now I feel like playing Magic: The Gathering (You hear that Wizards of the Coast, I play the game and you can sponsor me! ... HEY! Don't you be Jellocycling me!) Anyway, the magic page is nice.
Everything else in the public area seems to be peachy keen and I have no problems or anything outstanding to report on. So we move on to the next section!
The Application:
More or less your standard gambit, so no odd snafoo's or flashy shinies to report on. (I think I've reached my limit on odd random words on this article!)
The Private Area:
The Layout is just altered slightly for the c-box on the left hand side but it more or less looks the same! I don't see any new private pages to read and look over but there is a nice little affiliate thing in the lower left hand corner. So overall it's fine.
Forums:
Decent amount of forums with good descriptions for each forum here, I don't really mind the lack of hotlinks here because there isn't too many forums. If there are more to be added though I would suggest adding them in later to help with the navigation.
Other:
The member list is a nice and neat table with the normal things you'd find.
The profiles are nice and simple as well, but nice and neat. Overall they look nice without trying too hard to look flashy.
Roleplaying:
From what I read on the forums I categorize the roleplaying on this site to be intermediate to advanced. Though since this is my review I'm throwing in a few more cents, in that the way some of the posts are formatted makes it difficult to read.
Rating: 7.9 out of 10 Points.
Overall this is a good fantasy based RP I suppose it also have some post-apocalyptic tones and other genres as well if you pick the certain roles in the site. There are some good and detailed things here like the magic and the species that I really liked as well. Anyway like I said, overall good.
Reviewed by: The Jello Emperor
Anyway, the AD for the site is alright... truth be told I actually directly went to the points that were written out before I actually read the backstory. But when I did read the backstory it was more or less fine and dandy.
Let me put on my sexy leggings and lets grab a few customers, shall we? No? Well lets just get into the review then!
First Impression:
For some reason I feel like playing Dune... While I assume this is stylistic choice, the page is brown and... yeah. I don't have any real problems with the layout on functionality just that so far all I see is brown. Also, the little text there, I assume there trying to portray something deep and profound but isn't that the DEFINITION of darkness? But I digress, lets move on.
The Public Area:
The Races page is particularly impressive, I do have to admit that I didn't read through ALL of them. However, I am confident that if they spent this much time on them they should all be very well detailed.
The Magic page is also very nicely written as well, and now I feel like playing Magic: The Gathering (You hear that Wizards of the Coast, I play the game and you can sponsor me! ... HEY! Don't you be Jellocycling me!) Anyway, the magic page is nice.
Everything else in the public area seems to be peachy keen and I have no problems or anything outstanding to report on. So we move on to the next section!
The Application:
More or less your standard gambit, so no odd snafoo's or flashy shinies to report on. (I think I've reached my limit on odd random words on this article!)
The Private Area:
The Layout is just altered slightly for the c-box on the left hand side but it more or less looks the same! I don't see any new private pages to read and look over but there is a nice little affiliate thing in the lower left hand corner. So overall it's fine.
Forums:
Decent amount of forums with good descriptions for each forum here, I don't really mind the lack of hotlinks here because there isn't too many forums. If there are more to be added though I would suggest adding them in later to help with the navigation.
Other:
The member list is a nice and neat table with the normal things you'd find.
The profiles are nice and simple as well, but nice and neat. Overall they look nice without trying too hard to look flashy.
Roleplaying:
From what I read on the forums I categorize the roleplaying on this site to be intermediate to advanced. Though since this is my review I'm throwing in a few more cents, in that the way some of the posts are formatted makes it difficult to read.
Rating: 7.9 out of 10 Points.
Overall this is a good fantasy based RP I suppose it also have some post-apocalyptic tones and other genres as well if you pick the certain roles in the site. There are some good and detailed things here like the magic and the species that I really liked as well. Anyway like I said, overall good.
Reviewed by: The Jello Emperor
Labyrinth: Hell on Earth [8.9/10]
http://www.acornrack.com/lab/
All you peeps out there that didn't bother to watch me on Ustream will get to read this wondrous review of Labyrinth: Hell on Earth here on the web! This little wonder is a Dark, Futuristic, Religon... and some other good stuffs... RP all rolled up into one. Like a Wonder Ball! What's inside it? Who knows, lets eat the chocolate together!
So the AD for the site, I would have liked to see their name in the title.. so I could find it, but otherwise I love the little cartoon to make it look like ye olde cartoon times. Anyway the AD is good overall and there is a trailer for it but I really am not a big fan of trailers unless they're made by the owner with original content and not just a bunch of clips mashed together.
So.. it's time to go onward to the review! ... What, you want a semi-funny joke to segway in? Fine... What's blue and smells like red paint? BLUE PAINT! NOW ONWARDS TO THE REVIEW!
First Impression:
The secret is in the frosting, but I'll never tell! Anyway the layout is nice and compact, things appear and disappear... and then appear again.
The Public Area:
The first thing that comes to my mind as I read these pages is that the text should probably be justified, and the paragraphs I would maybe like them spaced out. Other than that it looks like it's overall fine. Truthfully though as I've read through all the pages at this point there isn't much for me to say except for I would suggest to justify the text. So lets move onwards to the next portion of the review maybe I'll have something to bash on in there! Oh wait, there is one small thing... the guest link doesn't work for me! I have to manually type in the guest/guest combination.
The Application:
The application is easy and simple, most of the profile work is done in the site.
The Private Area:
Layout Change Tiiime! Now there's another lady, but looks like she'll do more than just tell you that secret... she'll get you all cool with that fan! Anyway it looks fine, you can still see the news header in initial screen load so I don't really have a problem with all the things being so large. I don't see any private pages to look at but I would like to point out that the butterfly is a link back to the home page!
Forums:
Good amount of forums here, as well as the descriptions they have the hotlinks going down but none going back up so I'd maybe like to see that. Also I see there are special marking for who can go in where and whatnot, so if there's a way to make that more prominent I think that will help in the long run.
Other:
For the member list you get a list of pictures for each person on the site! This actually is something on what I consider to be ideal, you don't REALLY need to know post count and the last time they logged in. (Well the admins might but they have their own function in the admin section) All you School RPs out there take notice: Make your memberlist like a yearbook! Looks fancy and I think it's something rather new.
The member profiles are fancy with the whole javascript of things collapsing and such, maybe the basic portion could be automatically expanded since it is just the basic stuff. Oh and the member image changing thing is nice as well, just click the arrow and another picture! Lots of fun Javascript on the site... man if the code messes up I bet somebody dies in the mess of code.
Roleplaying:
From what I read on the site I categorize the roleplaying on the site to be Intermediate to Advanced.
Rating: 8.9 out of 10 Points.
Overall the site is great, little things here and there and lots of flashy Javascript. If you haven't noticed lately, the trend is if I have less to say and I'm more "filler writing" then you're getting a better score. It's just how it works, but anyway... just a few things here and there that I had problems with and some of them apparently are unable to be worked around so you'll just have to deal with it.
As I've decided to not have any duplicate scores once I hit 9.0, this is where Labyrinth shall stand. So Naveluce continues to be the 9.0 to beat, but this was VERY close. Get on that bilge Naveluce or else your 9.0 ship will be sunk soon...
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