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Next RP on the list is one called Twilight: Meeting of Worlds, it is a fantasy RP which takes place in a land where all your favorite characters from Games, Anime or Manga come together and then you get to see what happens.
The AD basically says the same thing as I just did, except with more words and of course with a bit more detail including some of the plot points. Alright everyone, dodge the Kamehameha, deflect the Vine Whips and steer clear of the Dragon of the Darkness Flame and onwards to the review!
First Impression:
It's Blue! I have no complaints about the layout everything is nice and compact.
The Public Area:
The Front page is just the story from the AD, in this case it's fine because as far as I can tell at this point it is a user facilitated plot. When a more in depth site plot comes around however I would like to see the expansion of that on the front or a separate page.
The Rules page is overall fine, but I would have liked rewording on the very last rule. The one that asks what anime your Made-up is from. If it's made up then it's not in any anime, but I took it to mean that if the character is based off principles off a certain anime then that's what you should put down.
(Spelling/Grammar Errors: Rule 4, last 3 words.)
The Userlevels page is just a basic listing so I have no major problems here however I would have liked dashes or colon or something separating the userlevel from the explanation.
Taken Characters page is again another listing, I did see at least one person who was not on the listing however.
Filling out an Application page is written well and I have no major problems. Again I would have like to see a dash or colon or something separating the text.
(Spelling/Grammar Errors: "indepth" is two words: in depth)
The Application:
The general application, however they at least tell you to save it before you submit which is always nice.
The Private Area:
Layout change! ... kinda. Basically everything is the same except for the recent threads at the top. There are no new pages in the private area so we move on to the next section.
Forums:
There are a good amount of forums for the site, with decent descriptions. I would have liked some hotlinks to each individual section for quicker navigation. Also, a bit more separation between each section would have been nice, it helps avoid the giant text wall effect.
Other:
The Member list is a neat and organized list divided into the userlevels. I've always been a fan of creating a new account for separate characters, very few member lists can show each individual character well. There seems to a be a problem going from the member list to users profiles, it puts 124548 in front of the actual user ID.
Member profiles are generally filled out well, again the multiple character thing is sometimes a problem trying to sort out all the information. If anything they should link to their profile in the "Multiple originals" section in the OOC boards.
Roleplaying:
From what I read on the forums I categorize the roleplaying on the site to be Intermediate to Advanced, however some of the postscripts and whatnot made the text hard to read.
Rating: 7.2 out of 10 Points
The inital concept of the site is the main reason the site is and will be successful, having multiple "main" characters interacting is intriguing. While there looks to be the beginnings of a site wide plot at this time people interacting is the main driving force of the site which may or may not be a problem.
Reviewed by: The Jello Emperor
Next RP on the list is one called Twilight: Meeting of Worlds, it is a fantasy RP which takes place in a land where all your favorite characters from Games, Anime or Manga come together and then you get to see what happens.
The AD basically says the same thing as I just did, except with more words and of course with a bit more detail including some of the plot points. Alright everyone, dodge the Kamehameha, deflect the Vine Whips and steer clear of the Dragon of the Darkness Flame and onwards to the review!
First Impression:
It's Blue! I have no complaints about the layout everything is nice and compact.
The Public Area:
The Front page is just the story from the AD, in this case it's fine because as far as I can tell at this point it is a user facilitated plot. When a more in depth site plot comes around however I would like to see the expansion of that on the front or a separate page.
The Rules page is overall fine, but I would have liked rewording on the very last rule. The one that asks what anime your Made-up is from. If it's made up then it's not in any anime, but I took it to mean that if the character is based off principles off a certain anime then that's what you should put down.
(Spelling/Grammar Errors: Rule 4, last 3 words.)
The Userlevels page is just a basic listing so I have no major problems here however I would have liked dashes or colon or something separating the userlevel from the explanation.
Taken Characters page is again another listing, I did see at least one person who was not on the listing however.
Filling out an Application page is written well and I have no major problems. Again I would have like to see a dash or colon or something separating the text.
(Spelling/Grammar Errors: "indepth" is two words: in depth)
The Application:
The general application, however they at least tell you to save it before you submit which is always nice.
The Private Area:
Layout change! ... kinda. Basically everything is the same except for the recent threads at the top. There are no new pages in the private area so we move on to the next section.
Forums:
There are a good amount of forums for the site, with decent descriptions. I would have liked some hotlinks to each individual section for quicker navigation. Also, a bit more separation between each section would have been nice, it helps avoid the giant text wall effect.
Other:
The Member list is a neat and organized list divided into the userlevels. I've always been a fan of creating a new account for separate characters, very few member lists can show each individual character well. There seems to a be a problem going from the member list to users profiles, it puts 124548 in front of the actual user ID.
Member profiles are generally filled out well, again the multiple character thing is sometimes a problem trying to sort out all the information. If anything they should link to their profile in the "Multiple originals" section in the OOC boards.
Roleplaying:
From what I read on the forums I categorize the roleplaying on the site to be Intermediate to Advanced, however some of the postscripts and whatnot made the text hard to read.
Rating: 7.2 out of 10 Points
The inital concept of the site is the main reason the site is and will be successful, having multiple "main" characters interacting is intriguing. While there looks to be the beginnings of a site wide plot at this time people interacting is the main driving force of the site which may or may not be a problem.
Reviewed by: The Jello Emperor
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